NaNoWriMo #4!

 

My fourth NaNoWriMo in 5 years: this time, a new-adult backcountry-skiing non-romance.

Yeah, I'll work on the marketing... after I edit.

Book Review: Me Before You by Jojo Moyes

 

Spoilers follow.

Partway through: 

• It is hard to put down.
• Mysteries: what happened when he was left alone by previous caregiver.
• Ticking clock: so many days to change his mind. 
• What the protagonist wants: Initially, just to make money to help her family. She stays in the job despite really not wanting to. Then around 30% it changes to wanting to keep Will alive.
• It is a savior story: basically that she is enough to make his life worth living. I do have a suspicion, given the sequel titles, and that I heard it is about grief, that she doesn't succeed in this.

Upon Finishing

Yeah, love wasn't enough. It makes me wonder how this is classified as romance (it is according to the title page). I guess because the two love interests end up together, even though it isn't happy ever after.

Emotions: I *sobbed* through the death scene. Something very much working there. 

I was not mad about the outcome. My guess is that the author gave us enough hints so that I figured it out. First, on a message board, a quad tells her she shouldn't be trying to change Will's mind. Second, there are the rugby parents. And then finally Lou's own mother is so against it that Lou ends up arguing, backing up Will's opinion and his right to make the decision.

In the end, I wouldn't have cried about the ending if I didn't care about Lou. 

Analyzing her character to find out why I care:

• I think we like her because she's helping out her family
• She is sympathetic in that she tries to do the right things: not only helping out her family, but trying to quit the job when she feels unable to do it
• It isn't very likable that she has no ambition, but I imagine that goes over better in England. It was normal for working class kids there when I lived there 35 years (!) ago. 
• However, this is balanced by her having the high-achieving sister. I think that excuses it: of course she didn't think she could amount to anything 
• I imagine it is quite relatable that her boyfriend got all fit and left her behind (although not for me). He is definitely enough of a jerk that we want her to ditch him but not so much that we're mad at her for not doing so. It works because we see what is going to happen, and it probably helps that he is off-screen for the most part. 
• As it goes along, we see she does resent her sister for having the baby and not having to work, basically Lou is making all these sacrifices and then Treena goes off to college. Doesn't feel at all unreasonable for Lou to wonder how Treena bought new shoes, but even more we don't hold the thought against Lou because she thinks it is petty of her to think this!

Plot

There are some interweaving of plot and character, ranked here from effective to pointless to negative:

• Sister going to college means Lou takes the big room, at a time where she's gaining confidence. Then when sister comes back to visit, there is a room conflict, which pushes her toward Will, diverts to Patrick, and not only brings all of that to a head but pushes her to live with Will (otherwise she just would have gone home). All of this exerts those kinds of pressurs that make previously barely-tolerable situations intolerable
• Dad losing job. Initially adds stakes to Lou needing a job (on top of the inciting incident of her leaving her job(?)). When he gets a job with Will's father, this absolves Will from feeling guilty for his potential suicide taking away the family's income (because Lou won't be employed by them anymore)
• Will's parents' relationship. Dad having the affair adds tension but doesn't have a big effect on the plot in the end 
• communication awkward with Mrs. Traynor (have to keep secrets). Amplify existing
• maybe Lou seeing him is why he gives the job to her father?
• Huge complications with regards to Will's suicide, in that Will living seems to be the thing that is holding the parents together. But how terrible for his dad to only stay with the family while he's alive. First of all, that gives him a selfish argument for Will to die (which doesn't seem to bear any weight on the ending). Second, why would he then abandon his wife once she's lost Will? Doesn't really make sense. 
• Rape history. I'm not convinced this was necessary. Absolving Lou of her guilt is a gift that Will gave her, but he gives her a lot in many aspects of her life. It allows Will to save her in the maze, which might be their first physically intimate experience.  It gives Lou a reason to have eclectic fashion, but there are other justifications for that. So overall I don't think it's worth using this cliche.
• Update: I read a review that reminded me that this event in Lou's life was why she shut herself off from taking an adventurous trip to Australia. That kind of makes sense (although that it would make her want to stay in the town where it happened instead of getting away is arguable) but again, I don't think there needs to be justification for someone living and working in the small English town where they grew up.

The last of that is a criticism, but overall this was probably the most compelling book I read all year. I was thinking about the characters frequently, and I read it in a week or less I think. I also found myself making text-to-self connections (a phrase I learned in my kids' elementary school lessons but works, right?), appreciating my and my husband's (so far) good health. Can't argue against that!

Also, I will counter arguments from people who say it is pro-suicide and believe it pushes that "there is no way to live a good life as a quadriplegic." There is so much in there about how that is not at all true for everyone, even for the majority, but there are a small number of people who want to be able to make that decision for themselves. And taking away that agency is terrible considering how little they can control in their own lives.

Book Review: Red Moon by Kim Stanley Robinson

 

Rating: 2/5

Looks like I'm not going to finish it. It was moderately interesting but just wanders around too much. Physically and literarily. 

1) The two main (perhaps? see 2) characters are off the moon by 30% and then back there by 50%. Seemed to have less to do with the moon than with China, which is fine. I guess that is half of the title! But not why I was reading it.

2) Many POVs and I often can't tell who is talking. Multiple 1st person (don't tell Chuck!) with foreign chapter titles (don't tell Geoff!) made it difficult. I have little doubt they will all come together (some already have) but don't have the patience to keep reading.

Book Review: The Vanished Birds by Simon Jimenez

 

I was put off by all the character changes early on. Maybe I've just absorbed the writing "rules" that you shouldn't abandon characters, you shouldn't start with characters who won't show up (barely) again, you should have your characters eventually meet. But my emotional reaction shows me that these rules are there for a reason. I felt disappointed when the initial character was clearly left behind. I felt frustrated when a four-person spaceship crew that I had struggled to get to know all or mostly abandoned their captain. Maybe it is realistic that not everyone would stay but I had an aversion to getting to know the new crew when my previous investment had been squandered. 

There was a bit of hope when a long-ago character, who had seemed very important and indeed is where the title comes from, turns out to live long enough to potentially meet up with the current characters. There was hope that two people who'd both lost their lovers long ago would end up together. These hopes were destroyed in a nuclear-type reaction at the end. Very unsatisfying.

Another source of dissatisfaction was with the timing. One of the main questions is finally answered around 70%, but the character very selfishly doesn't do anything about it for a while. Maybe this is realistic but it made me mad at him and wanting to skip ahead to when something interesting happens. 

The author's use of language and the sci fi of his world are definitely unique. He turns nouns into verbs and makes up great tech: near-FTL travel is done by folding into the pocket and riding celestial currents that have names. Time dilation is real and affects people's lives profoundly (at least at the beginning). The ships are piloted with cat's cradles. Cool stuff like that.  (There is a chance I just don't know that this is common in these kinds of stories!)

I also appreciated how many non-heterosexual relationships there were without any mention or need to use identity words. Very much just a "this is how the world is."

And overall it is a thumbs up because hey, I finished it! Granted, it was my only book while camping for two weeks (thanks to having left my kindle on a plane, unexpectedly returned by Delta's great lost and found system), which basically forced me to get over my annoyance at the loss of main characters so early. By then I was invested enough, and hopeful enough, to carry on. But it was worth reading. 

Book Review: All Systems Red by Martha Wells

 

Not a very sympathetic protagonist: A human who does the least possible work in order to maximize their TV viewing time is pretty annoying. It helped a little that she is a bot, because then it is a novelty really, but it still interfered with me wanting to cheer for her.  What I did find sympathetic is how ashamed she seemed to be about her identity and her past. Again this was unexpected for a robot which is probably what makes these books such a big deal right now.

Another complaint: when she does find a group of people who don't have a negative bias toward her, there's no explanation for why they are different from everyone else in their culture. How much stronger would it have been if the protagonist could have converted them onto her side? 

Finally, [spoiler alert], I was dissatisfied with the ending. It seems to be setting up to have an interesting sequel rather than providing a satisfying conclusion. I haven't analyzed the text to see how much it fits with the Heroine's journey, but another guess is that the author didn't recognize how a strong ending could be that the protagonist stays with her found family, and instead pushed her to become the independent, solitary hero that we are so often told is the only option.

As for what I liked, the overall point is that I managed to finish the book so these days that's a strong positive. As small craft positive was that the injury the protagonist suffers at the beginning was a great device for describing her physicality. 

Book Review: Borne by Jeff VanderMeer

 

I failed to write this early on so am missing some things I'm sure. Overall, 4/5. I loved how color was so important in the world, and how inventive it was. Truly unusual, very imaginative creatures. It felt like an easy read, never bogged down, but it wasn't compelling enough for me to look for a sequel. A positive in that I read it all the way through, but I also can't remember the ending a few months later.

Book Review: The It Girl by Ruth Ware

 

I don't remember what led me to put this on my library hold list, but other than not being speculative, it has strong similarities to my current work-in-progress (aka the moon novel). Dual timelines, with one character known to die from the beginning. Grief in the 'after' timeline. But it is basically a murder mystery, which I don't usually read.

Overall, I liked it. I stayed in bed an hour this morning reading the ending because there were some major twists. I was really happy that I hadn't identified the killer, and even happier with the final twist.